Thursday, September 17, 2009

#2 Limited Autobiography (One momment in time)

Heart racing, plams sweaty and thoughts race threw my head over and over again.
Looking closely, and thinking in my head denying what was already in front of me.
Wiping the sweat off my forhead and saying to my self "why?"
Blood rushing threw my vain at a fast rate than slowing down again.
I turned my head to see her again as my legs continued to walk.
As she was looking at the other direction her beauty had struck me.
My heart felt like it stoped, just frezzing time to just continue looking at her.
Her eyes were as beautiful as the night sky, the stars and the moon.
Her hair was as smooth as silk and shined in the light that was coming from above her.
Her lips were like puff ice-cream, soft to the touch but always juicy.
Her hands was soft looking, as if they were as soft feathers.
Her skin was smooth looking, as if like a fresh new born baby.
My heart began to slow down in her presence and beauty.
It pumped blood threw my whole body as if it wanted to get out of my chest and go to her arms.
Im my thoughts i felt like the world was disapearing only her was the only reason to think and breath.

1 comment:

  1. Beautiful. The short sentences work very well to add to the moment. What were the sounds of the moment? The smells? Use your senses.

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