Thursday, January 28, 2010

Spoken Word Poerty Duo

Theme: Funny
Subject: Letter to a Giraffe

A: Dear Mr. Giraffe
P: You're a Big animal
A: You're a Tall animal
P: You have a long neck
A: You have a long touge
P: You can run fast
A: You can walk Swiftly
P: You have big feet
A: You drink alot of water
P: Your spotted coat is always unique
A: ohh Mr Giraffe your so intresting


Another Differnet Poem

Dear Mr Giraffe
Why are you so tall?
Is it to hide your face from other animals?
Is it sappose to help you see very far?
Are you shy?
Are you scared?
Your such an intresting animal
And yet you don't say anything
Ohh your so very special


Another Differnet Poem

Do you know what a Giraffe is?
Isn't it that animal that has 2 legs and flys?
no....Thats a bird, a Girafee has a long neck,
Oh is it that hairy creature that you can put it threw a slinky?
No.....That's a ferret,
Ohh ohh i know it's that animal with long tusk that's made of ivory,
Thats an elephant, This animal has Big feet.
OHHH..... i know this, Rihno
Uhhh this has animal has spots on it,
Ohh eats grass and leaves right?
Yeah
Ohhh this is way to easy, it goes moooo too
Uhhhh....Sure.......That's a giraffe

#30 Free Wrtie: Just so you know

Just so you know i just came late to class so this Free write may not be that long, so im going to freestyle it really fast.
Just so you know I'm not over you you,
Just you so you know I miss you,
Just so you know I need you,
Just so you know I still love you,
Just so you know I want to be with you,
Just so you know I care for you you,
Just so you know I'm always here for you,
Just so you know I still can't forget those memmories,
Just so you know I want to be your one.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Spoken Word Poetry

Slow days
Always the same thing,
Over and over and over again,
Nothing new,
Nothing Special,
Boring Classes,
Boring attitdue,
Not happy,
Not Sad
Just Bored out of my mind,
Damn these slows days,
I want excitment,
The trill,
The action,
Something new,
Something Epic.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Spoken Word Poetry.

It's above this one.

Sunday, January 17, 2010

HOMEWORK: Post a reflection of today's exercise. Post your finished piece and the group's finished piece if possible.

HOMEWORK: Post a reflection of today's exercise. Post your finished piece and the group's finished piece if possible.

Reflection:
I thought of it kinda hard at first since I'm not that "into" poems that much anymore.But it was fun to eliminate words to make the poem straight to the point. We should do more poems in the future so i can more understanding the "passion" of writing of what you feel in the "moment".

Poem:
Somewhere out there someone is writing a poem
Dark and alone.
Thinking of thoughts of broken hearts.
That tear people apart.

Oh the bitter cold shoulder
To question who is bolder
Oh love is so complicated
It's like being constipated

Holding feelings back
Because affection lack
To hide behind shadows
to be bitter and shallow.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

#29 Free Write: Things that ryhme with Orange

Things that ryhem with orange would be englishly impossible. The only way you can probably be able to ryhem with orange is when you make it half ryhem word like doorhindge or Lozenge. But pretty much, it would be pretty impossible for a person to actually ryhem Organce with anyo other word. It's exactly like silver. Noting ryhems with silver but onle half ryhem words. But sapposdley you can't really use hlaf ryhem words in a poem in class. So you might want to not say organge in a rhyeming word. So that is pretty funny when you acutally want to ryhem orange and silver.....Damn i feel sorry for any poent who made a paom using the word silver nad orange becuase that will totally get them stuck in what they want o finihs. Man, im pissed that i finished my Religion Mid-year project and yet i can't it in today becuase sapposdely you can't e-mail it to them but you have to hand it in as a CD with dtat files. What a waste of matriels. It faster to jus t E-mail to a sesignated Teacher e-mail provided by the school than just use a hceck list to minus people e-mail it to her. The chances of you losing the information becuase it is in Hardrive somehwere in USA from the compnay like Hotmail or something related. I'm Pretty sure Mr. Halowka will able to create on SPS host website to hold all information on teacher Saint pats. E-mail. It saves matirel and more effiecient. You could probably lose some data if somoen melts the Hardrive that stored the data but what are the chances of that happening. They might just have a backup system that would back up every 6 hours. Nice i wne t way off topic.

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Poem: Sky Tears

As I sat on the bench,
I close my eyes and listen the rain drop that falls from the sky,
I feel my cold breath escape from my lips.
The feeling of the cold wind brushes my wet face,
I feel nothing of the "outside world" just only the feeling of lonelieness,

I open my eyes for second,
And catch my breath.
I see her face infront of mine.
But i blink,
Shes gone.

My heart skip a beat than,
I just close my eyes again.
Lonely tear drops start to fall down from my eyes.
The sky is crying with me.




Subject Lonely tear Drops.