Friday, January 8, 2010

Poem: Gap

Every time were together
You push away
And I get sacred That gap between us
will grow and break us
We need to stay strong and proud
Or we will fall apart
I don't want to be missing you
I really need you
I wish we still love each other forever
and ever
and ever
and ever....

1 comment:

  1. Those words are lovely. Consider either extending the poem with further images OR keeping the simplicity of the line, but working on form...

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