HOMEWORK: Post a reflection of today's exercise. Post your finished piece and the group's finished piece if possible.
Reflection:
I thought of it kinda hard at first since I'm not that "into" poems that much anymore.But it was fun to eliminate words to make the poem straight to the point. We should do more poems in the future so i can more understanding the "passion" of writing of what you feel in the "moment".
Poem:
Somewhere out there someone is writing a poem
Dark and alone.
Thinking of thoughts of broken hearts.
That tear people apart.
Oh the bitter cold shoulder
To question who is bolder
Oh love is so complicated
It's like being constipated
Holding feelings back
Because affection lack
To hide behind shadows
to be bitter and shallow.
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