Thursday, January 28, 2010

Spoken Word Poerty Duo

Theme: Funny
Subject: Letter to a Giraffe

A: Dear Mr. Giraffe
P: You're a Big animal
A: You're a Tall animal
P: You have a long neck
A: You have a long touge
P: You can run fast
A: You can walk Swiftly
P: You have big feet
A: You drink alot of water
P: Your spotted coat is always unique
A: ohh Mr Giraffe your so intresting


Another Differnet Poem

Dear Mr Giraffe
Why are you so tall?
Is it to hide your face from other animals?
Is it sappose to help you see very far?
Are you shy?
Are you scared?
Your such an intresting animal
And yet you don't say anything
Ohh your so very special


Another Differnet Poem

Do you know what a Giraffe is?
Isn't it that animal that has 2 legs and flys?
no....Thats a bird, a Girafee has a long neck,
Oh is it that hairy creature that you can put it threw a slinky?
No.....That's a ferret,
Ohh ohh i know it's that animal with long tusk that's made of ivory,
Thats an elephant, This animal has Big feet.
OHHH..... i know this, Rihno
Uhhh this has animal has spots on it,
Ohh eats grass and leaves right?
Yeah
Ohhh this is way to easy, it goes moooo too
Uhhhh....Sure.......That's a giraffe

#30 Free Wrtie: Just so you know

Just so you know i just came late to class so this Free write may not be that long, so im going to freestyle it really fast.
Just so you know I'm not over you you,
Just you so you know I miss you,
Just so you know I need you,
Just so you know I still love you,
Just so you know I want to be with you,
Just so you know I care for you you,
Just so you know I'm always here for you,
Just so you know I still can't forget those memmories,
Just so you know I want to be your one.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Spoken Word Poetry

Slow days
Always the same thing,
Over and over and over again,
Nothing new,
Nothing Special,
Boring Classes,
Boring attitdue,
Not happy,
Not Sad
Just Bored out of my mind,
Damn these slows days,
I want excitment,
The trill,
The action,
Something new,
Something Epic.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Spoken Word Poetry.

It's above this one.

Sunday, January 17, 2010

HOMEWORK: Post a reflection of today's exercise. Post your finished piece and the group's finished piece if possible.

HOMEWORK: Post a reflection of today's exercise. Post your finished piece and the group's finished piece if possible.

Reflection:
I thought of it kinda hard at first since I'm not that "into" poems that much anymore.But it was fun to eliminate words to make the poem straight to the point. We should do more poems in the future so i can more understanding the "passion" of writing of what you feel in the "moment".

Poem:
Somewhere out there someone is writing a poem
Dark and alone.
Thinking of thoughts of broken hearts.
That tear people apart.

Oh the bitter cold shoulder
To question who is bolder
Oh love is so complicated
It's like being constipated

Holding feelings back
Because affection lack
To hide behind shadows
to be bitter and shallow.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

#29 Free Write: Things that ryhme with Orange

Things that ryhem with orange would be englishly impossible. The only way you can probably be able to ryhem with orange is when you make it half ryhem word like doorhindge or Lozenge. But pretty much, it would be pretty impossible for a person to actually ryhem Organce with anyo other word. It's exactly like silver. Noting ryhems with silver but onle half ryhem words. But sapposdley you can't really use hlaf ryhem words in a poem in class. So you might want to not say organge in a rhyeming word. So that is pretty funny when you acutally want to ryhem orange and silver.....Damn i feel sorry for any poent who made a paom using the word silver nad orange becuase that will totally get them stuck in what they want o finihs. Man, im pissed that i finished my Religion Mid-year project and yet i can't it in today becuase sapposdely you can't e-mail it to them but you have to hand it in as a CD with dtat files. What a waste of matriels. It faster to jus t E-mail to a sesignated Teacher e-mail provided by the school than just use a hceck list to minus people e-mail it to her. The chances of you losing the information becuase it is in Hardrive somehwere in USA from the compnay like Hotmail or something related. I'm Pretty sure Mr. Halowka will able to create on SPS host website to hold all information on teacher Saint pats. E-mail. It saves matirel and more effiecient. You could probably lose some data if somoen melts the Hardrive that stored the data but what are the chances of that happening. They might just have a backup system that would back up every 6 hours. Nice i wne t way off topic.

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Poem: Sky Tears

As I sat on the bench,
I close my eyes and listen the rain drop that falls from the sky,
I feel my cold breath escape from my lips.
The feeling of the cold wind brushes my wet face,
I feel nothing of the "outside world" just only the feeling of lonelieness,

I open my eyes for second,
And catch my breath.
I see her face infront of mine.
But i blink,
Shes gone.

My heart skip a beat than,
I just close my eyes again.
Lonely tear drops start to fall down from my eyes.
The sky is crying with me.




Subject Lonely tear Drops.

As I Sat on the Bench

Washroom Door swueeking
Dlow-dryer blowing
footsteps of all grades can be heard throughout the halls.
Theres are some of the sounds you hear when you close eyes and just listen

Mrs. Zimmny teaching math
Mrs. Green Teaching finicial Skills
Mens school shoes making the shuffle sound
while Women School make that Click Clock sound

Queen giggles,
Kristine Saying "I need a poeem"
There is so many sounds echogin throughtout the halls
Just Close your eyes and listen..

#28 Free Write: Lonely Tear Drops.

Loenly tear drops....Falling down the faces of the man who once who was thinking that he would have a meaningful relationship. But at the end he ended lonely and left with only a broken heart. She was out somewhere, haveing time of her life, With other man. That though scared him the most, what she might do and will do with other guys. Tears kept falling down his face down the ground as he started take deep breaths to hold the tears back. He said "I love you so much, but i guess it wasn't meant to be". He just kept he head down and his hands over his hair. He than said "If i were to be with you right now it would make me one of the happiest guy in the world. I wouldn't let you go when yout in my arms again". BUt than he took a sigh " But i know that will never happen". As Days went by and he continued to do the same rutein of his daily life. He promised that he would make himself better each day as person inside and out. He got stronger phyically and metnally. He began deteremined to be what he know what he can be if tried. He trained during the night and worked and learneed during the day. He redress his wordrob and bought fresh and coths that were his kind of personailty. Not to much pride but no to little of it. he knew this was the beggining the proccess of regain what he once lost, confidence. A year passes than he still can remeber the girl he once loved so much but at the same time hates with all his gut. He still thinks of her daily, never a day goes by without him no think of her and the good times they spent togethere. walking in the park and the time they just spent togethere just hugging each other. In his Though "My heart still feeels broken and i'm not sure if or when i can recover". A tear almost starts to form up in his eye, but he sucks his gut and thinks of the way she just left him for another guy... That made him angry but at least he dosn't remeber the good time anymore. He repeated this process over and over again. To him he felt like it was curse to be this kind of guy. Being hoplessly in love with a girl who dosn't want anything to do with him. Feeling like a patheic loser and undersrving person of not love.

Friday, January 8, 2010

Poem: Gap

Every time were together
You push away
And I get sacred That gap between us
will grow and break us
We need to stay strong and proud
Or we will fall apart
I don't want to be missing you
I really need you
I wish we still love each other forever
and ever
and ever
and ever....

#27 Free Write: In Winter

Winter is okay, it's not epic or anything it's just there to have some fun and enojoy a limited time of weather. Glad it comes once a year or else it would be really cold like -Oc. Than that would be damn bad.... I could stand cold but for that many days in the cold with low tempratures that are colder than alot of places that would be a hug bummer. Like calagary, It's cold, always has snoew never has sunlight sometimes for long periods. Than you always have to wear such thick jakets and Boots. Than you can hardly stay outside for long before you get hypertemia. So that means you always need to know you neighbors and relatives so you can do emergancy shelter before you seat than freeze to death. You would also need a gps or a old school map. So you always need to be preapred for weathers that change dramaically. So pretty much have to be prepared everyday of the weather, what kind of gear your brining and how far you plan in going. You always have to plan ahead before going out. Than yo uneed to take survival classes to learn howo to survive if you get stuck in the middle of nowhere which would be dangerous becuase you could be walking on Frozen lake and not know what it was. Than while your sleeping you fall in the water and drown to death Becuase you panic in waking up finding yourself in cold water. Lack of air than you try to search for the crack you fell into. You need to know what kind of wood that would burn in cold wither. Than learn know how to stack this up in a speciual formation so taht you can have an easy start of a big bone fire. So anther reason why you should take survival class is becuase people do such simple things that could actually kill you over a certain period of time that freeze you to death or make you die of eating bad raw food. many Factors will need to be read over and studied before you starty thinking to live in cold areas. Than when you actually start living in those areas it's really hard to get supplies becuase there are certain dates a plane comes to drop off goods for small towns and sometimes under developt cities. Than you need to pay for education that would be pretty expensive becuase i think they would acutally need to hire someone from aborad from a diffrent province or sometimes a diffrent country. Which would be sometimes the neighborcountry who has the same conitions but know what to do.

Wednesday, January 6, 2010

#26 Free Write: Man Up

This statement saying "Man Up" remindes me of shakshere the play hamlet, When hamlet himself is going crazy and cannot control his thoughts of death and which would be easier. Either live fighting or die failing. The killing himslef would be easier, but unknown region scares him. For nothing is known after the death, there is no map nore guidence. He argues with himself to live or die. So far all i can remeber for my part of the silique of the part of the play im doing start with to be or not to be. "To be or not to be, that is the question. Weither tis nobler for the mind to suffer, The slings and arrows of outragous fortune, Or the take arms against the sea of trouble, And, by oppsing, End them, To die, To sleep, No more,--And by a sleep to say we end, The heartache and the thousand natural shock, That flesh is heir to, Tis a consummation, Deavoutly to be wished, To die, to sleep, To Sleep perchance to dream,--aye there's the Rub, For in the sleep of death what dreams may come, When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, Must give us pauce, Theres the respect, That make calamity of so long life" Than I still need to read half a page more to finish this silalaque for the group i am in to rpesentate our part of hamlet. Huh, This is going to be hard since it takes long time to remeber old english, It helps though. Makes you understand what they are saying and meaning at the same time. Sometimes you have tokeep rereading the same thing over and over to get a better understanding of what you want to understand or mistook for anther answer. Hamlet is pretty niffty guy, even though he may go over the top and say such weird things. If he wasn't so obbsed over his dead father and the ghost that told him to do a dirty deed he would be a pretty relaxed man who would have great honour. A man's man, No homo, When i say mans man i meant Alpha Dog.